21 Yorum yapilmis “ Sevgi Dolu, Umut Dolu, Aşk Dolu ”

1. Külliyat demis ki 30 Nisan 2010 21:24

   Bu şiirine susmak yazmamak şeytandan olurdu ; üstad muhteşemsiniz meydan sizin bir siz kaldınız şiir yazan … selamlar

2. Delikanlı demis ki 30 Nisan 2010 21:57

   Üstadım her zaman ki gibi duygu yüklü dizeler yüreğinize sağlık.

3. Zeynep demis ki 30 Nisan 2010 22:50

   Ateş kırmızısı bir gül bırakıyorum sayfanıza muhteşem bir şiirdi.
   Yüreğimdeki tüm sevgimle beraber…

4. Paraf demis ki 30 Nisan 2010 22:51

   Sen benim geçen yılımsın
   Sevgi dolu, umut dolu, aşk dolu
   Geçmek bilme
   Ateşim dinsin

   Sen benim günümsün
   Arzu dolu, umut dolu, aşk dolu
   Ateş kırmızısı bir gül bıraktın
   Elimi yakan

   Sen benim yönümsün
   Sevgi dolu, umut dolu, aşk dolu
   Al götür uzaklara
   Yaşam gün doğmadan sürsün

   Barış Erdoğan

   Harikasın Mirim.

5. Yaka Rozeti demis ki 01 Mayıs 2010 11:12

   Hiç bitmesin o aşkla yazılanlar, hep dilimizde süregelsin güftesi, bestesi…

   Tebrikler…

6. Melike Ayan demis ki 01 Mayıs 2010 12:03

   Gerçekten mükemmel, elinize yüreğinize sağlık…

7. Ufuk Serdengecti demis ki 01 Mayıs 2010 13:54

   Üstadım muhteşem bir yeteneksiniz. Çalışmakla ya da çok okumakla şair olunmuyor eğer yetenek varsa onu geliştirmek için çalışmalar yapılabiliniyor ben buna yürekten inanıyorum.
   Şiirleriniz ve yüreğiniz karşısında saygı ile eğiliyorum.

8. Sevda Çiçeği demis ki 01 Mayıs 2010 18:10

   “Her gece ay paramparça oldu. Her gece yıldızlar birer birer düştü sokaklara yıldızları saçına takip gelmeni bekledim.”

9. Selcan demis ki 22 Temmuz 2010 22:19

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10. Paraf demis ki 03 Şubat 2011 22:21

    

11. Selcan demis ki 03 Şubat 2011 22:35

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12. Selcan demis ki 03 Şubat 2011 22:38

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13. Selcan demis ki 03 Şubat 2011 22:43

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14. Selcan demis ki 03 Şubat 2011 22:51

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15. Selcan demis ki 03 Şubat 2011 22:55

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16. Selcan demis ki 03 Şubat 2011 22:59

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17. Selcan demis ki 03 Şubat 2011 23:04

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18. Selcan demis ki 03 Şubat 2011 23:06

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19. Selcan demis ki 03 Şubat 2011 23:10

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20. Selcan demis ki 03 Şubat 2011 23:12

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